【正确答案】[范文] On Two-child Policy Recently, our government has introduced a new policy that every family can have two children, which stirs up a heated discussion. From my point of view, I definitely support it. The reasons are as follows. Firstly, it can resolve certain problems caused by one-child policy. Under the influence of one-child policy, every family only has one child, which caused the phenomenon that children don't know how to share with others. Secondly, it makes parents feel more secure. When there is only one child in a family, every member pays all attention to this child. If anything bad happens to him or her, it will destroy the whole family. Thirdly, it makes children grow more happily. With the accompany of their brother or sister, they know how to care about others and share. All in all, I totally support the two-child policy. I believe that it brings lots of benefits to the Chinese families and our country. With this policy, I think people will be more energetic about their work and live more happily.
【答案解析】开放二胎政策与我们每一个人的生活息息相关。题目要求考生表达对此政策的看法或观点。作文可分为三段:第一段引出话题,开门见山,摆明观点;第二段解释观点,分条论述;第三段总结全文,重申论点。 一、开门见山,引出话题(From my point of view, I definitely support it.) 二、解释支持二胎政策的原因 1.能解决计划生育政策导致的某些问题(it can resolve certain problems caused by one-child policy) 2.使家长们觉得更加安全(it makes parents feel more secure) 3.让孩子们更加快乐地成长(it makes children grow more happily) 三、总结全文(All in all, I totally support the two-child policy.) 论二胎政策 最近,中国政府出台了一项新政策:每个家庭都能有两个孩子。人们对此进行了激烈的讨论。就我而言,我绝对支持这一政策。 这有以下原因。第一,二胎政策能解决计划生育政策导致的某些问题。在计划生育政策的影响下,每个家庭只能生一个孩子,这造成了孩子们不懂得如何与人分享。第二,二胎政策使家长们觉得更加安全。当一个家庭只有一个孩子时,每一个家庭成员都把所有的注意力放在这个孩子身上。任何不好的事情一旦发生在孩子身上,将会给整个家庭造成毁灭性的打击。第三,二胎政策使孩子们更加快乐地成长。和他们的兄弟姐妹一起成长,会让孩子懂得如何照顾他人和如何分享。 总而言之,我完全支持二胎政策。我相信它会给国家以及每个家庭带来巨大的益处。有了这一政策,我认为人们会更加有动力地去工作,并且会生活得更加幸福。 1.开门见山,引出话题:我绝对支持这一政策。 2.采用“Firstly”“Secondly”“Thirdly”列举原因,层次清晰。 3.使用亮点词汇如“introduced”“definitely”“phenomenon”等;亮点词组如“happens to”“pays attention to”等。 4.使用“From my point of view”,表意明确。 5.采用“All in all”总结全文,重申论点。