Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following picture. In your essay, you should 1. describe the picture briefly, 2. interpret its intended meaning, and 3. give your comments. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)
【正确答案】正确答案: Laid out before us is a satirical scene: some youngsters are sitting around a table to have a feast together. However, all of them are staring attentively at their mobile phones instead of chatting with each other, leaving the delicious dishes untouched. As the caption below the picture indicates, it"s a party in the mobile phone era. It goes without saying that the cartoonist intends to reveal a strange, yet familiar phenomenon; mobile phone addiction, the very product of science and technology evolution. People with such addiction will be so consumed by anxiety and depression once their mobile phones are unreachable. In-controvertibly, the popularity of smart phones, coupled with the coming of 4G era, enables people to access the Internet more conveniently and interact with others, near or far. However, as everything has its pros and cons, the overuse of mobile phones does exert negative influence on us. The obsession with the virtual world created by mobile phones saves us from face-to-face communication, thus resulting in the growing interpersonal estrangement. Therefore, effective measures should be taken to alleviate the situation. First, cherish the time shared with your beloved ones, and have more heart-to-heart conversations. Second , read paper books or take part in group activities instead of clinging on to mobile phones.
【答案解析】解析: 图画中这一熟悉的生活场景令人印象深刻,与2009年“网络的”‘近’与‘远’”类似,均反映现代科技给人们带来便利的同时,使人与人之间关系疏远。面对餐桌上的美味佳肴以及身边的亲朋好友,四个青年人无动于衷,只专注于自己的手机屏幕。而图画下方的文字点明了主题:手机时代的聚会。其实,该漫画表现的场景只是手机依赖症的一个缩影。随着科技的发展,手机依赖症已成为当下的热点话题。考生在写作时可以先扬后抑,在认同手机带来便利的同时,对其造成的负面影响展开分析,并给出行之有效的解决方法。 第一段:描述图画。围绕人们“专注于手机,同桌而坐却互不交流”展开叙述,并点出图画文字“手机时代的聚会”,使图画寓意呼之欲出。 第二段:揭示寓意,深层分析。首先对手机依赖症作以说明,继而对手机的利弊进行分析。根据图画信息,该段应侧重论述其弊端。 第三段:总结评论。针对手机引发的问题提出解决措施。