Someday, there may well be a similar memorial for the | 【B1】________ |
unfulfilled prophecies of the creators in the latest: | 【B2】________ |
breakthrough—interactivity. Will it really changed the world? With | 【B3】________ |
so much big money and so many big dreams pin to an idea that is still | 【B4】________ |
largely on the drawing boards, there' s no limits to the hype. Simply | 【B5】________ |
put, the ultimate promise is this: a huge amount of informations | 【B6】________ |
-—available for anyone at the touch of a button, everything from airline | 【B7】________ |
schedules into esoteric scientific journals to video versions of | 【B8】________ |
off-off-off Broadway. Watch a movie won't be a passive experience. | 【B9】________ |
At various points, you' ll click on alternative story lines and creating | 【B10】________ |
your individualized version of“Terminator XⅡ.” Consumers are send | 【B11】________ |
as good as receive all kinds of data. Say you shoot a video that you | 【B12】________ |
think is particularly artsy. Beam it out and to make a small fortune by | 【B13】________ |
charge an untold number of viewers a fee for watching. Peter Jennings | 【B14】________ |
would obsolete. Video-camera owners could record news they see and | 【B15】________ |
put it under the universal network. On the receiving end, the era of the | 【B16】________ |
no-brainer will have finally arrived. An electric device called an | 【B17】________ |
“intelligent agent” would be program to know each viewer' s | 【B18】________ |
preferences and make selections from the endlessly stream of data. | 【B19】________ |
Viewers could select whatsoever they wanted just by pushing a button | 【B20】________ |
in the machine. | 【B21】________ |
【B1】
for→to
(a memorial to……的纪念馆。为固定搭配。故将for改为to。)
【B2】
in→of
(根据最新的突破性技术是由发明者做出的可知此处为从属关系。故将in改为of。)
【B3】
changed→change
(根据前面的情态动词will可知此处应填动词原形。故将changed改为change。)
【B4】
pin→pinned
(根据资金和期望是被这一想法所系的,因此此处应为被动形式。故将pin改为pinned。)
【B5】
limits→limit
(根据前面be动词用的is可知此处应用单数形式。故将limits该为limit。)
【B6】
informations→information
(information为不可数名词。故将informations改为information。)
【B7】
for→to
(available to对……可获得的。为固定搭配。故将for改为to。)
【B8】
of→at
(根据句意,录像节目是在百老汇录制的。此处强调地点。故将of改为at。)
【B9】
Watch→Watching
(此句不是祈使句,且不表示目的,因此watch应采用动名词形式。故将watch改为watching。)
【B10】
creating→create
(根据句子前面的情态动词will可知此处应用动词原形。故将creating改为create。)
【B11】
are→will
(根据此处为描述的期望的目标,故应采用将来时。故将are改为will。)
【B12】
good→well
(根据句意,消费者既能够接收;也可以发送各种各样的信息。as well as也。故将good改为well。)
【B13】
去掉to
(and前后表并列的动词,形式应保持一致。而and前beam为动词原形。故应去掉to。)
【B14】
charge→charging
(根据前面的by可知此处应用动词的ing形式。故将charge改为charging。)
【B15】
would∧obsolete→be
(be obsolete过时的。此处缺少be动词,且前面为would。故应添加be。)
【B16】
under→on
(根据句意,然后放在环球通用信息网上。应用介词on。故将under改为on。)
【B17】
electric→electronic
(此处应意为电子装置,而不是电力装置。故将eletric改为electronic。)
【B18】
program→programmed
(根据句意,“智能助手”可以通过编制的程序……。故将program改为programmed。)
【B19】
endlessly→endless
(此处修饰名词,应该用形容词形式。故将endlessly改为endless。)
【B20】
whatsoever→whatever
(whatsoever是whatever的强调形式,并且用法比较正式,大都用来加强否定句的语气。此处不具备此条 件。故将whatsoever改为whatever。)
【B21】
in→on
(既然是按机器的按钮,按钮应设置在机器表面上,而不是里面。故将in改为on。)