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On March 18, 2012, a girl whose net name was “Zoufan”, left her last message on her twitter page, saying that she was going to end her life. She was later found dead, identified as a 20-year-old university student. On November 20, 2012, a 12-year-old boy in Guangzhou committed suicide by falling off his residing building. There have been increasing news reports of such suicide incidents involving college students or even younger ones, which becomes a pressing concern in the society.

What do you think are the causes of the increase in suicidal tendencies among students nowadays? What suggestions would you give schools, parents, and the public about how to tackle this problem and improve students'psychological health?

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My Views on Suicidal Tendencies among Students

In the increasingly complex and stressed society, students are shouldering more and more pressure from various aspects of life and some of them have been suffering mental illness. As a result, an increasing number of reports of such suicide incidents come one after another. Greater concern should be aroused in our society and attention should be paid to the causes and solutions of suicidal tendencies.

Personally, I reckon that there are two reasons for suicidal tendencies. To begin with, the increasingly complex and stressed society put so much pressure on students that sometimes they cannot bear it any more, thus committing suicide. There is too much pressure in the real life: pressure from schoolwork, family and relationship with others. When these stresses are combined, students fall apart. Additionally, some students bearing great psychological pressure will go to extremes if they cannot be listened to or noticed. In the modern society, many people are trapped in their own business, even parents. They have little time to accompany and care for their children. At school, some students are too timid that they dare not pour out their emotions, let alone turning to psychological consultant for help. They fear that their illness will be exposed and they will be laughed at. Consequently, they will think that they are of no consequence and no one will notice them. Eventually, they have suicidal tendencies for escaping away from the cruel and indifferent world.

To tackle this problem, schools should carry out life education, through which students can be aware of the value, respect and love of life, learn how to keep harmony with themselves, others, society and the nature. Parents should spend more time with their children; love is the most precious for children. Also, parents should not push their children too hard; instead, they should give children more freedom and leisure time for their healthy growth. For the public, they should develop a sense of social responsibility and do their part in caring for others.

In conclusion, greater attention should be paid to students. The public, schools and parents should do their parts to eliminate suicidal tendencies of students.

【答案解析】

第一段作者提到在高压社会下,学生肩负着越来越大的压力,他们中的一些已经患上了精神疾病。自杀报 道接踵而至。社会应该更加关注导致学生有自杀倾向的原因,并且提出解决对策。第二段作者给出了自己 的原因:一是现在的学生承受着太多来自学业、家庭和情感方面的压力,所有的压力集中在一起之后就把 学生压垮了。二是有心理问题的学生不敢向别人倾诉或寻求专业帮助。甚至家长都无暇顾及自己的孩子。 渐渐地,他们就会认为自己被全世界忽视而选择逃避这个残酷冷漠的世界。第三段作者给出了自己的意 见:学校应该开展生命教育,让学生意识到生命的宝贵。家长应该多多关怀自己的孩子,不给他们高压, 多给他们自由,使其健康成长。公众应该培养自己的社会责任心,多多关怀别人。最后一段作者对上文进 行了总结。再次呼吁要给予学生更多的关注和关怀。