Read carefully the following excerpt on the trend of graduate entrepreneurship and then write your response in NO LESS THAN 200 words, in which you should: summarize the main message of the excerpt, and then comment on whether it is a good way for the graduates to start up their own business right after graduation. You should support yourself with information from the excerpt. Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks. From Graduates to Entrepreneurs College graduates across the country are once again on the hunt for jobs. Job seekers flocked to a job fair held at the China International Science and Technology Convention Center. While fairs are filled with job seekers, another type of employment opportunity is flourishing among graduates. In order to relieve pressure on the labor market, the Chinese Government announced a string of policies over the past year encouraging people to start up their own businesses. Ye Xiaoying, a student who will graduate from Beijing Forestry University this year, now has a part-time job at a western-style restaurant in north Beijing named Hou Hui You Qi, which literally means See You Again. It was created and is operated by several college students. According to Ye, most of these students will graduate this year and plan to continue working here after graduation. Ma Yao, one of the restaurant's founders, said that the restaurant was initially financed through crowdfunding. In fact, the 2 million yuan in start-up funds received all came from crowdfunding, and about 80 percent of it was contributed by college students. Li Xiaolin, a member of the Chinese People's Political Consultative Conference (CPPCC), also supported entrepreneurship but gave his own suggestions. "By starting up their own businesses, college students can realize their ideals and values. It's a good thing, not to mention that such actions can also help create more job opportunities."
【正确答案】正确答案： Don't Rush into Entrepreneurship Supported by a string of policies from the Chinese Government, graduate entrepreneurship is flourishing in recent years. For example, Hou Hui You Qi is a restaurant founded by several college students who contributed eighty percent of the crowdfunding of the restaurant. Some experts spoke highly of the value of graduate entrepreneurship by which college students can achieve their ideals and values. From my perspective, it is not a good way for the graduates to start up their own business at once after graduation. There are mainly two reasons for it as follows. For one thing, graduates lack of related industry experiences and work practices that are the prerequisites for starting a business. Most successful entrepreneurs begin their entrepreneurship after years of working in related industry. For another, it is difficult to raise funds from banks or investors because any wise investor will not choose a business risky and uncertain, especially when the business is operated by a novice. Mostly, lack of fund is a huge limitation for the development of many small companies owned by graduates who have to lend money from friends and family. To conclude, it is advisable for the graduates to begin their entrepreneurship after working some years when they become rich in industry experiences with the support of investors.