【正确答案】[高分范文]
Dear Sir,
I am very excited when I hear the news that the 29th Summer Olympic Games will be held in Beijing in 2008. And I know that you are collecting mascots. I hope that you can consider the Tibetan antelope. There are two reasons why I choose it. First, the Tibetan antelope has a very mild temper, which symbolizes peace and friendship.
Second, it can stand coldness and run at a very high speed. In my opinion, that's the symbol of the Olympic spirits. I know that there are many choices now, but I do hope that you can choose the Tibetan antelope as the mascot of the Olympic Games. Thank you!

【答案解析】[解析]
这是一篇应用文体的写作，本题要求考生给奥组委写一封建议信，建议将藏羚羊选为吉祥物之一。考生在写这篇作文时，首先应该注意的是这是一封信。所以不管是什么内容，信的格式不可以错。再就是，要考虑文章的内容题材。既然是一份建议信，写作时要求语气诚恳。同时要有礼貌，表达出建议人的心态。在语言方面，注意语言简练，层次分明，将重点罗列出来。尽量让看信人在最短的时间内获取最多的信息。
[高频词句]
Olympic Games奥运会
mascot吉祥物
Tibetan antelope藏羚羊
the symbol of the Olympic spirits奥运精神的象征