【正确答案】[范文]
My Ideal Job
Different people choose different jobs according m their interests and ability. Some want to be scientists, while some choose to be doctors. As for me, my ideal job is to be a teacher.
I'd like to be a teacher because I like the pace of the academic calendar. Summer and winter vacations offer an opportunity for laxation, research and writing. I'd like to be a teacher because teaching is a profession built on change. When the material is the same, I change — and, more important, my students change. I'd like to be a teacher because I like to ask questions that students must struggle to answer. The world is full of right answers to bad questions. While teaching, I sometimes find good questions. So teaching gives me pace and variety, and challenge, and the opportunity to keep on learning.
However, the most important reasons why I want m teach are that my students will grow up and change in front of me. Some will become university students with academic success and find good jobs; some will become interested in the urban poor and served as civil rights lawyers. What's more, teaching offers something besides money and power: it offers love, not only the love of learning and of books and ideas, but also the love that a teacher feels from his or her students.
During the following years, I will try my best to prepare for my ideal job and hope that I will become an excellent teacher in the future.

【答案解析】[审题] 每个人的理想工作是不一样的。对此要求你谈谈自己的理想工作，并说明理由，约两百字左右。
[思路] 第一段：表明观点，提出自己的理想职业是老师；
第二段：用排比句阐述自己想当老师的理由；
理由一：教师有寒暑长假
理由二：教师是个能改变人的职业
理由三：教学是个不断学习的过程
第三段：指出教书最重要的理由：教书能育人，能感受到爱。总结，首尾呼应。
第四段：总结合文，展望未来