【正确答案】[范文]
Style More Important Than Substance?
Style, of course, is less important than substance. If a rotten apple is placed in a crystal bowl, will you happily eat it?
Take my big brother's ex-girlfriend Tracy for example. Tracy used to spend two hours every day getting ready. She is beautiful on the outside but not so kind inside, who would laugh at injured dogs and even take pictures of them just for the fun of it. She shouted at beggars without offering them any help as if their poverty would spread. No one could stand her ego center, net even my brother and they broke up at last. Although she was charming in "style", her inner substance" made her awful and unpopular.
Have you heard of a story named "Beauty and the Beast"? The beast seems unacceptable in appearance, right? But finally he wins the heart of the princess for his bravery to show love. His qualities, not his style, lead to his success.
The TEM-4 writing section also is an example to support my stance, ff I only focus on the delicate usage of words or a magical style of my essay, leaving the content dull and unsatisfying, the judges will certainly not give me a high score. Content is the soul of the essay to grab the reader's attention even if the words are simple. To compare style and substance--substance is the key player while style has only a bit part.
【答案解析】[审题] 人们看待人或物时,总是容易注重外表而忽视品质。形式难道比内容更重要?对此谈谈自己的看法。字数约两百字左右,并给文章起个合适的标题。
[思路] 第一段:开门见山直接给出自己的观点:内容比形式重要;
第二段、第三段:分别用身边实例和虚拟的故事《美女和野兽》说明观点;
第四段:用专四写作本身为例,同时总结全文,点明论题。