【正确答案】Sample A Dear Ms Lambert, Thank you for your letter about details of Business Management course. There would be 75 person on the course. Unfortunately, we will not be able to inform you the date yet, as we are planning to organise an exhibition in summer season. As soon as we arrange the date of exhibition, we will inform you when we are going to start. We wondered whether any chance to have a discount when we attend the course over then 50 person. Could you please send us some information about discounts? We look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Band 5 This answer represents a full realisation of the task; the content is confidently organised and expressed with only a few non-impeding errors. Sample B Dear Ms Lambert I thank you for your letter. It's possibly there are nine sportsmen and six sportswomen on the course. I apologise me but I don't know actually the date of the course. It's probably that the course begins in few months but I don't know precisely. I keep you at your concience the last year bill for seventeen persons, and I hope that the price won't be change. Yours faithfully Band 2 In addition to idiosyncratic phrasing and a number of errors, this answer fails to achieve the third and fourth content points so can only score a maximum Band 2.