【答案解析】{{B}}Sample E{{/B}} Geneva, the 27th November 2004 Dear Sir, I am writing regarding the advertisement called 'Most Improved Organisation Award.' I work in a bank in Geneva. We are specialized in private banking. Our organisation made big improvements for handicaped people last year. They rebuilt the building to order to make it accessible to wheelchairs. But they also engaged two deaf and two blind people. Being next to those people several employees asked to learn their language. The bank then organised lessons for braille and sign language. This new experience touched many clients and the building is now accessible for everybody. Furthermore, there is a new positive motivation and atmosphere inside the organisation. If the bank win the price, we will reinvest the money into advertisement for disabled people and we will create a foundation. We would like help people to communicate and to help handicaped people to find interesting jobs. It will be a hard task but a nice one. I hope that you will be touched by the effort made. If you have any requests or need any further information, please do not hesitate to call me. I look forward to hearing from you and remain, Yours faithfully, Franqoise Dupont Senior Private Banker {{B}}Band 3{{/B}} This is a safe, umambitious answer, which fulfils all the criteria for a band 3. {{B}}Sample F{{/B}} Dear Michael James: I've read the information of Most Improved Organisation Award in newspapers and feel it a good opportunity for my organisation. Well, our organisation is not for profit. The aim of my organisation is to help those animals which need help. We treat those lovely animals as our good friends because we think life is also important to those animals although they could not speak. With development of industry, the level of life of us human beings has improved a lot while that to those animals is getting worse and worse. During last year, we have saved about 1,000 kinds of animals. When finding a dying animal, we immediately send it to the animal hospital and then take good care of it. When the animal recovers, we actively get touch with those kind people who are willing to help or animal organisations. After sending those lives to related people or organisations, we leave our telephone number and keep touch with them. As far as we know, 80% of animals we saved have been leading a happy life while the others have died for age. Every member of my organisation is perfect. They are kind and warm-hearted. Through our efforts, more and more people have come to realize that animals also have the same right of living as our human beings. Comparing with those organisations for profit, I don't dare to say how much profit my organisation has reiceived. But I think profit is not the only factor in the award, isn't it? If we are honored enough to gain the award, we'll spend all the award on investment on animal hospitals and animal medical care. I believe that what we are doing is a good deed and we also believe that our organisation is the most improved one! We're waiting for your reply and please contact me on 241989 during business hours. Thank you. Yours, Xu Xin' {{B}}Band 2{{/B}} Although the level of language is sufficient for a band 3, the question has been inadequately dealt with as the second bullet point has been totally omitted and the response is purely a description of the organisation.