【正确答案】 Nowadays, it is hard for university graduates to find jobs. Therefore, starting their own businesses seems to be a way for them.
More specifically, there are several masons why I advocate self-employment. Firstly, for the graduates themselves, self-employment is a necessity. Due to the fierce social competition, many graduates have great difficulty searching for positions in the job market. Moreover, self-employment offers opportunities for graduates to put their knowledge into practice and realize their personal ambitions. Secondly, as for the self-employment itself, it means higher efficiency and flexibility. Contrary to working in a company or government office, they work on their own when they start their own business, which implies that they have more control over the way they work and more freedom in arranging their personal time and schedule. Accordingly, self-employment can also bring them higher financial reward more proportional to their efforts. Thirdly, for the national economy and social stability, self-employment, by providing a practical way for graduates to be employed, can greatly reduce the ever-increasing pressure in the national job market, which helps to harmonize our society. Fourthly, self-employment can provide new economic growth points and optimize the structure of socialist economy. Furthermore, it can diversify our social life by providing more and various services and goods. Lastly, through self-employing, the national spirit of creation, perseverance, hard-straggle and plain living will be passed on.
Simply put, with the economy, the job prospect and self-development becoming less predictable, having their destiny in their own hands seems to be the best alternative.
【答案解析】[解析] 写此类文章关键在于把握话题——“是否鼓励大学毕业生自主创业”。一般来说,写作步骤可分为三步:首先,引出话题,提出自己的观点“应当鼓励大学毕业生自主创业”;第二,从个人、创业和社会等角度讨论大学毕业生自主创业的“利”;第三,对上述内容进行总结。