【正确答案】[范文] Hard Work and Success Some people hold the view that success is only for those with talent or who born in a good family, but I think talent or good family is not enough to be successful. At least, hard work is also a vital factor. Hard work to success is like bricks to a building. To succeed in life, one first needs to set a goal and then gradually make it more practical. And in order to realize the goal, one must spend a large amount of time studying and practicing. We all know that Han Hong is a famous Chinese singer but what you may not know is that she spent hours every day practicing just in order to sing a song well enough. Sometimes she even missed her meals. Many people have such similar dreams but only a few people have the drive to pursue them diligently. To become great at certain things, you need to work day in and day out. When you see people exhibiting some great skills or having achieved great success, you know that they have put in a huge part of their life as a dear cost for their success.

【答案解析】第一段：指明尽管一些人于生拥有好的家庭和具备良好的天赋，但是个人努力也至关重要。 第二段：用三个例子来具体说明成功需要付出巨大的努力。 第三段：天赋和努力一起造就成功。