【答案解析】Sample A
Dear Karen Petersen
I have just seen your advertisement on the newspaper. I am writing to tell you that I have a suitable building for rent.
The building has an office, a big room and a bathroom. In addition, it has a telephone line and internal access which is good for you to open a internet caré It is located in the city centre and it will be available from 20 ^th June. If you have further question, please telephone me or send an E-mail to me.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely
Band 5
This script achieves all the content points and uses a good range of language. The letter is well organised and generally has a positive effect on the reader.
Sample B
Dear Miss Karen Petersen,
I"m writing to informing of my own building. I saw your advertisment in the ABC business centre. I think my building might suitable for your business.
My own building in 10 Oxford Street. There is a good position in London. There is 700ft on second floor. From underground station to there just 10 min on foot and there is near bus station as well.
There were phone-line, light, kitchen and toilet already. There is new printing as well.
My building is available now. If you need more information or you would like to visit my building, please call 020 1234 1234.
Yours sincerely,
Band 3
All the content points have been achieved but there are a number of errors and little attention has been paid to text cohesion; consequently, the effect on the reader is only satisfactory.