【正确答案】[参考范文]
Who should pay for this education, the government or the student?
Education is valued as one of the major institutions in almost every society. Meanwhile it is a very expensive operation, so it is important to consider carefully who should pay for it.
One view holds that it is' the students that should pay for this education. That sounds, to some extent ,justifiable. The recipients can get a lot of benefits after receiving education. Those who have received higher education usually have more chances to get a good job, and can earn more money than uneducated people. In this sense the recipients should pay for the advantages that they receive. However, the fact is that those who have most to gain from education are the members of society itself, so the administrator, the government should pay for this education. Those people who receive it to use what they have learnt in the service of society can contribute to society, the rewards which they get are of less significance.
Meanwhile the law regulates that all people should have equal rights to receive education. With these rights deprived, many poor children will be excluded from schools just because their parents do not have the money to pay for it. So, it should indeed be, not the students, but the government, that should pay for the education system.

【答案解析】[写作要点]
这是一篇关于两种不同观点的议论文。根据题纲全文自然分成三段。第一段引出讨论的话题；第二段交代就教育费用问题的两种不同观点及各自的论据；最后一段在前面论证的基础上得出自己的观点。三段不同的中心确定了各自的主题句：第一段，“So it is important to consider carefully who should pay for it；第二段包含两个分论点“In this sense the recipients should pay for the ad vantages that they receive”和“．．．the government should pay for this education”；第三段，“so，it should indeed be，not the students，but the government，that should Pay for the education system”。根据以上框架，可对各段主题句进行适当扩展。第二段谈到学生们应支付教育费用时可以以那些拥有更多就业机会的毕业生为例。论证政府该支付费用时则可指出社会是最终的受益者。提出个人观点时则可谈及贫困生受教育的问题。注意一定要有自己的观点，并注意各段之间的过渡。