问答题
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: Write a composition of at least 150 words based on the following picture. You should describe the picture, give your opinion on the topic, and use specific reasons and/or examples to support yourself. Write your answer on the
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【答案解析】[参考范文]
Unfolded before us is a picture simply drawn yet profoundly meaningful. An ancient prince"s mansion is being pulled down, while two stone lions are holding each other, crying bitterly. On the wall of the mansion hangs a sign which reads Historical Relic of the city. This picture obviously intends to convey to us this message, damage to historical relics has become a serious problem in China. This issue has aroused much concern in the society.
To my best knowledge, a variety of factors are responsible for this problem. To begin with, businessmen want to make huge profits with new commercial buildings. A modern shopping center, for instance, is more valuable than a mansion in their eyes. Moreover, some local governments have ignored the value of these historical relics, which were damaged or destroyed in the name of economic development. Last but not least, people have not realized the significance of the historical treasures, which carry not just the history but also the spirits and cultures of our ancestors.
To my best understanding, the following approaches can be figured out to address the problem. In the first place, the government is supposed to enforce the laws more strictly to stop destroying historical relics. In the second, the media need to enhance people"s awareness in historical relic protection. Only by adopting these measures, can we resolve the problem effectively and efficiently.
[解析] 1.主题与类型:图片中正在拆除一座列为市级保护文物的王府。显然这是在谈论文物遭破坏的话题,而这又是一个比较普遍的社会问题,因而可以写成问题分析解决型。文章可写成三段。
2.结构与构思:
第一段:首句使用图画描述功能句“Unfolded before us...meaningful”,接着用两三句话描述图画内容,然后用图画主题功能句“This picture obviously...message:”,后面紧跟提炼出的主题句,可以指出破坏文物的社会问题很严重,最后使用“This issue has aroused much concern in the society”总结首段。
第二段:段首句用原因分析功能句“...a variety of factors are responsible...”,然后从两三个方面分析原因。
第三段:首句使用提出建议的功能句“...the following approaches can be figured out...”,然后提出具体措施,最后使用解决问题的总结功能句“Only by adopting these measures...”结尾。