【答案解析】参考范文
On the Risks ofRecent College Graduates" Self-employment
This bar chart provides some interesting data regarding risks of recent college graduates" self-employment. As listed in this chart, the most serious risk is lack of fund, which ranks as high as 31%. Difficulty on marketing and lack of experience on business management rank secondly and thirdly, accounts for 25% and 20% separately. There are still some other risks, such as low technological sophistication, etc.
There are three factors leading to these risks. First of all, newly graduated students probably have not accumulated enough start-up capital. Secondly, campus is usually called ivory tower, in which students have little social relationship. This increases the difficulty of marketing. What"s more, the main outcome of college learning is knowledge instead of experience, but in real operation, business experience largely outweighs knowledge.
In summary, recent college graduates have many risks in self-employment, therefore although self-employment should be encouraged, it is essential for recent graduates to start their own business in a careful way.
[解析] 要求考生根据图表的内容就“大学生创业风险”这一话题进行简述。行文时首先要简要描述图表,提出论点;之后就大学生自主创业的诸多风险进一步说明,提出出现这些风险的原因;最后建议大学生自主创业需谨慎。