填空题
.You have THIRTY seconds to preview the gap-filling task.
Now listen to the talk. When it is over, you will be given TWO minutes to check your work.
Revision of Essay Drafts
The initial revision should focus on the essay as a whole.
The first step:
1 ●the rough draft
—containing too little or too much material
—discussing things unrelated to
2 ●how to revise
—provide
3 to convince your readers
—eliminate unrelated material
The second step: revise for organization ●group similar ideas in the proper order
●produce an outline from the draft to Check
4 The third step: revise for length ●mind the stated length
●stick to
5 Revise for
6 of the essay
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7 by breaking up some longer sentences
●use short sentences to make important points
●use long sentences to
8 ●eliminate
9 expressions
●use fresh and interesting descriptions
●write with
10 as much as possible
●write in the active voice