【正确答案】[范文] The Harmfulness of Fake Commodities
Nowadays fake commodities have almost found their way into every field. They bring a lot of harms to producers and consumers, and sometimes they even prove to be dangerous to people's lives.
Firstly, compared with the genuine products, fake commodities attract more consumers because of their much lower prices. This, of course, causes great economic losses to the real manufacturers since fake commodities damage the credibility of the genuine products. Secondly, fake commodities also harm consumer's interests. For example, consumers cannot enjoy the free after-sale services provided by the genuine-product manufacturers if something goes wrong with the fake commodities. Thirdly, fake commodities can even threaten people's lives. It is reported for example that some consumers died after drinking fake wine.
Therefore fake commodities are a serious problem in our country. We should make every effort to solve it. The legitimate producers should safeguard their legal rights by powerful precautions and, at the same time, try to upgrade products and cut prices so as to attract more consumers. The authorities should redouble their efforts to punish the production and sale of fake commodities. In addition, consumers should resist the temptation of the cheaper fake commodities and create no opportunities for them.
【答案解析】 这是一篇典型的给定观点型作文,要求考生以给定的观点作为中心思想(论点)进行论证。
根据题目要求,文章结构如下:
第一段提出观点,假冒商品给制造商和消费者都带来损失,有时甚至危及人们的生命。
第二段用三个理由论证观点,假冒商品损害产品信誉,给制造商带来经济损失。假冒商品损害消费者利益。假冒商品有时甚至危及人们的生命。
第三段总结引申主题。假冒商品是严重的社会问题,政府、制造商和消费者要采取相应的措施,杜绝假冒商品的生产和出售。
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假冒商品的危害
当前,无处不在的假冒商品给消费者和生产者带来了许多危害,有时甚至会危及人的生命。
首先,因其价格比正版货品低很多,假冒商品比正版产品吸引到的顾客更多。当然,这样的情况让真正的制造商蒙受了巨大的经济损失,因为假冒产品损害了正版产品的可信度。其次,假冒商品也损害了消费者的利益。比如说,若消费者买到的假冒商品出了问题,消费者是无法享受由正版商品厂家提供的免费售后服务的。再说,假冒商品甚至会威胁人们的生命。据报道,一些消费者由于喝了假酒导致死亡。
因此,假冒商品的泛滥是我国当前面临的一个严重问题,我们应不遗余力地去解决它。正当的生产方应通过强力的预防措施维护它们的合法权益;同时,还应通过升级产品和降低价格来吸引更多的消费者。相关部门应加倍努力,严惩生产和销售假冒商品的行为。此外,消费者要抵抗假冒商品的诱惑,尽管其价格低廉。只有这样,才不会让假冒商品有机会造成危害。