【正确答案】Sample C
Dear Mr Morgan Thank you for your letter. We need a new delivery company because we want to have staideble partner. We need deliviring new equipment for computers. But all details I want to say.
Band 2
Only two points successfully addressed, and the response is also very short at only 35 words.
Sample D
Dear Mr Morgan,
Thank you for your letter.
I beleive there is a great opportunity for us because the delivery company we'd been working before has gone bankrupt, so we're looking for a new one. Let me explain what type of goods we usually need to deliver. We run a small on-line shop in the Internet offering different types of hardware like personal computers and various networking eqipement.
Currently we're expanding in the local market so we're interested in a long-term partnership with a delivery service, like yours. Could you please think of a suitable day to visit our office?
I look forward to your reply!
Best regards,
Mr P,
CEO
Band 5
This is a full representation of the task set. All the content points are achieved, and the language used is confident and natural. It would have a very positive effect on the reader.
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