【答案解析】[写作要求]
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文章基本内容 |
所写文章要以题目给出的提示句作为结尾 |
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语法与结构 |
词汇的选择要契合文章的命题 |
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文章结构及连贯性 |
至少有两个小段落 |
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适用文体及格式 |
非正式文叙述或中立型 |
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目标读者感觉 |
能够理解故事产线 |
[参考例文]
The phone rang as I was leaving. I was already late for school, but I
hurried back "Hello?" -- no one was there. I left the house.
I
was too late the bus had just left. I had no choice but to wait for
another I watched my classmates in the windows as they disappeared over a
hill.
As I came into the empty classroom my teacher jumped, as
ill were a ghost. "Where is everyone? What's happening?
He
didn't look at me. "The bus was hit by a truck. I don't know how many
survived."
The next months were a blur of tears and shock.
Fifteen of the class had died and twenty were injured. In the classroom, our
last year of high school passed quickly; we barely noticed. I was strange to
them after that--I had escaped. I was never really one of the group again. I
couldn't know what they knew.
Only later did I ask: Who made
that call? I could have been on that bus too. That one telephone call changed my
life for ever.