【答案解析】[范文]
My View on Happiness
Everyone is eager for living a happy life. Some people believe that in modern society wealth is the most important factor. They try every means to make money, hoping that it will bring them happiness. Of course money is of great importance in people"s lives, for it can buy food, clothes, cars and houses, which would bring us happiness.
Others, however, think differently. They say that happiness means a healthy physical body. With good health they can do their work well. And the progress in work, in turn, will give them happy feeling.
In my opinion, I think both heath and wealth are important to our life and can bring us happiness. We should try to make a balance between them and gain wealth and happiness with a healthy body.
[解析] 这是一篇提纲式命题作文。提纲中提到“有些人认为……有些人认为……”,由此可以判断本文是一篇对比选择型作文,要求考生比较两种观点并表明自己的态度或看法。文章可分为三段,第一段提出一种观点并进行阐述;第二段提出另一种观点并进行阐述;最后明确表明自己的观点,可以适当地给出理由并重申自己的态度。
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