问答题
1. ●You work for a large company. You are going to be transferred to another department within your company.
●Write an email to all staff:
●telling them which department you are moving to
●saying when you will be moving department
●explaining what your new responsibilities will be.
●Write 40-50 words.
●Write an email to all staff:
●telling them which department you are moving to
●saying when you will be moving department
●explaining what your new responsibilities will be.
●Write 40-50 words.
【正确答案】Sample A
Dear All
I am writing to inform you that I am going to change a department next Monday 5 May.
In My new position will take place in the Marketing department, where I am going to be responsible of promoting the new products. And also to ensure their productivity.
Regards
Band 3
The candidate has addressed all the content points. The answer is concise, and although it contains a number of errors, these do not impede communication. The overall effect on the reader is satisfactory.
Sample B
To: all staff
From: Karen Müller / Sales Manager
Date: June 2nd, 2007
Subject: Department Transfer
Dear Colleagues,
I would like you to know that I will leave this department in order to take over a new job in the purchasing department.
My new employment will start on July 1st , 2007 and my main duty will be to negotiate supply contracts.
Thank you.
Karen
Band 5
The candidate has fully addressed all the content points. The language is natural and well controlled in its usage. The overall effect on the reader is very positive.
Dear All
I am writing to inform you that I am going to change a department next Monday 5 May.
In My new position will take place in the Marketing department, where I am going to be responsible of promoting the new products. And also to ensure their productivity.
Regards
Band 3
The candidate has addressed all the content points. The answer is concise, and although it contains a number of errors, these do not impede communication. The overall effect on the reader is satisfactory.
Sample B
To: all staff
From: Karen Müller / Sales Manager
Date: June 2nd, 2007
Subject: Department Transfer
Dear Colleagues,
I would like you to know that I will leave this department in order to take over a new job in the purchasing department.
My new employment will start on July 1st , 2007 and my main duty will be to negotiate supply contracts.
Thank you.
Karen
Band 5
The candidate has fully addressed all the content points. The language is natural and well controlled in its usage. The overall effect on the reader is very positive.
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