改错题

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

When I look at this picture of myself. I realize of how fast time flies. I had grown not only physically, and also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was took, I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club. Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time: car magazines and musical instruments. I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes, playing pop music, and collecting the late music albums. This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days.

【正确答案】

1.去掉 of,2. had改为have,3. and改为 but,4. took改为 taken,5. become 改为became,6.in 后加the ,7. they改为that/which,8. difference改为different, 9. late改为latest,10. your改为my 。

【答案解析】

该题考查学生准确使用英语的综合能力。做题时候,学生首先需要理顺文章脉络,弄懂文章大意:。本文是一篇记叙文。对照考查方向逐句分析找到错误并且准备修改。1. of去掉 realize是及物动词,去掉of。2. had→ have in the past few years是现在完成时的标志性短语。3. and→ but not only ..but also 固定短语。4. took→ taken 根据句意可知是被动语态。5. become →became 根据took可知用一般过去时。6.in 后加the 特指前句中的picture.7. they→that/which 考查定语从句。they不能引导定语从句,因为指代things,所以把they改为that或者which。8. difference→different 考查形容词。修饰名词kinds应该用形容词形式。9. late→latest 考查形容词最高级。根据句意可知此处指最新的音乐唱片,故把late改为latest。10. your→my 考查代词。根据句意可知此处是我高中时代生活的美好回忆,故把your改为my。