【正确答案】[参考范文1]
Dear Li Ming,
We are very happy to know that you have successfully passed the college entrance examination this year and have been admitted into Peking University. Allow us to give our most sincere congratulations on this exciting occasion.
You have all along been working hard at your professional studies, and you are excellent in most subjects. Your success shows that only hard work can yield good results, so I suggest that you should make a great progress in university life.
We take this opportunity to express our best wishes to you. Wish you greater achievements in your college education.
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Wei
[参考范文2]
Dear Li Ming,
Congratulations! I am glad to hear that you have been admitted by MIT. Your efforts and commitment have been paid off. You are the honor of our family.
Here come some my own advices of being a pre college student. First and foremost, you need to improve your communication because you will meet different people with different personalities in campus. Moreover, reading some reference books will help you to accumulate more knowledge and terms, which boost your competitiveness in campus.
Once again congratulate for your achievement!
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Wei
【答案解析】书信类应用文写作
Suppose your cousin Li Ming has just been admitted to a university. Write him/her a letter to
1)congratulate him/her, and
2)give him/her suggestions on how to get prepared for university life.
You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.
Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use "Zhang Wei" instead.
Do not write the address. (10 points)
写作知识积累
祝贺信常用句型
1.Please accept my heartiest congratulations.
请接收我最衷心的祝愿。
2.The news of... made me feel extremely happy.
……的消息让我万分高兴。
3.I think that no one could have been more deserving.
这份(荣誉/奖励)是你应得的。
4.It is... you can well be proud of, and we are all very excited for you.
这值得你为之骄傲,我们也为你而感到激动。