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【答案解析】Dear Editor, May 21st, 2015
I am writing this letter to call your attention to the negative effect of some television programs today. As you know, at present children"s programs are often full of violence and advertisements of poor quality instead of the ones in science and education. I am really worried because this is not all.
For instance, nowadays it is fashionable that many children are asked to play the roles of advertisements. This is bad in that after watching the advertisements the children tend to blindly compare themselves with others. Another bad thing is that the poems and proverbs, the cream of the Chinese culture, are often changed on purpose.
In my opinion, all these do harm to the sound growth of our children. I don"t think we should go on like this. Therefore, I sincerely hope you can take some measures to move in the right direction.
Yours,
A Worried Mother
[解析]
第一步:审题
1.题型:提纲作文;2.文体:书信。
第二步:框架分析
1.注意格式正确;2.将要点自然包括进去。
第三步:列出写作思路
1.目前电视节目的问题;2.自己的建议。
第四步:列出关键词和词组
I am writing to;negative effect Of some TV promgrams;violence;science and education;quality advertisements;misleading;poems and idioms;blindly compare…with…;in my opinion;I sincerely hope;etc.
第五步:落笔成文