【正确答案】[参考范文]
Studying a language in a country where it is widely spoken has many advantages．It is，therefore，a good idea to study English in a country such as the United States．However，I believe it is not the only way to learn the language．
In the first place，most students in non-English—speaking countries learn English at secondary school，and sometimes at university nowadays．Although their spoken English is not usually of a very high standard，their knowledge of grammar is often quite advanced．This is certainly useful when students come to an English—speaking country to perfect the language．Secondly，studying the basics of English at secondary school is less stressful than learning the language while overseas．This is because students living at home do not have to worry about problems such as finding accommodations，paying for their study and living costs，and trying to survive in a foreign country where day to day living causes much stress．
However，there are obvious advantages of learning English in the US．Every day there are opportunities to practice listening to and speaking with American people．Also，students can experience the culture firsthand，which is a great help when trying to understand the language．This is especially true if they choose to live with an American family，as exchange students for example．Furthermore，if students attend a language school full—time，the teachers will be native speakers．In this case，not only will students' speaking and listening skills improve，but attention Can be given to developing reading and writing skills as well．
In general，a good level of English can be achieved both at home and abroad，so long as the learner makes full use of all the resources．

【答案解析】[亮点回放]
用词亮点
(1)perfect the language：提高和完善对语言的掌握。
(2)accommodation：住处，膳宿。
句式亮点
(1)使用排比结构和复杂句。如This is because students living at home do not have to worry about problems such as finding accommodations，paying for their study and living costs，and trying to survive in a foreign country where day to day living causes much stress。
(2)主动语态与被动语态结合，避免句式单调。如…not only will students' speaking and listening skills improve，but attention can be given to developing reading and writing skills as well。
篇章亮点
(1)文章观点明确，层次分明，分析具体简明。
(2)使用了多个过渡词、转折词，使得文章结构清晰，逻辑性强等。
[谋篇布局]
1．第一部分可以表明对“在英语国家里学习英语固然是最好的方式，但并非唯一的途径”这样一种观点的看法，明确指出是同意还是不同意。
2．第二部分展开具体的讨论，分析在国内和国外学习英语的利与弊，可分几个方面来论述。
3．第三部分进行概括总结，对上文提及的意思进行精炼。