My first days at university were both exciting and worrying. My first
task was to find a suitable accommodation. Although it was my first 【C1】________
attempt at living on my own, I had a sense of adventure and I choose 【C2】________
a place far from familiarity of home. My advice is first to look for 【C3】________
university accommodation as it is usually more afford. If this is not 【C4】________
possible read the notice boards in the university campus, you will
find a considerable number of message offering a wide variety of 【C5】________
share accommodation. If you value your privacy, you could look for 【C6】________
a bedsit. As you can imagine, bedsits on university towns do not come 【C7】________
cheap and there are many agencies that you can turn to if you are 【C8】________
interested in this option. Finally one thing that you could consider is to 【C9】________
find lodgings outside town, which accommodation is cheaper. If you want 【C10】________
a peaceful neighborhood, this could be the choice for you.
【C1】
去掉a
“accommodation”是不可数名词, 表示“住处, 膳宿”, 因此应将a去掉。
【C2】
choose→chose
此句中“I choose...”作为与“I had a sense of adventure”并列的主句, 时态也应保持一致, 且although引导的从句也是过去时, 因此应将“choose”改为“chose”。
【C3】
familiarity→the familiarity
根据本句的含义“……尽管是第一次独立生活, 我有一种冒险的感觉, 我选择了一个地方, 远离(完全没有)家的熟悉感觉。 ”, 此处“familiarity”是特指, 所以前面要加上定冠词the。
【C4】
afford→affordable
“afford”是动词, 此处系动词be后应该加形容词, 因此应将“afford”改为“affordable”, 表示“负担得起的”。
【C5】
message→messages
“a number of”表示“许多”, 后面应该加复数名词, 且“message”是可数名词, 表示“消息、 信息、 广告词等”, 因此, 应将“message”改为其复数形式“messages”。
【C6】
share→shared
“share”是动词, 此处应该用其过去分词“shared”作为形容词来修饰名词“accommodation”, 因此, 应该将“share”改为“shared”。
【C7】
on→in
根据本句含义, “在大学城”应该用固定搭配“in university towns”, “bedsit”表示“卧室兼起居室”, 因此, 应该将“on”改为“in。
【C8】
and→but
本句的含义是“正如你能够想象的那样, 大学城里的卧室兼起居室并不便宜, 但是如果你对这一选择感兴趣的话, 你可以求助于许多代理机构”, 根据上下文可知此处前后话题具有转折之意, 因此, 应该将“and”改为“but”。
【C9】
√
【C10】
which→where
此处是where引导的状语从句修饰“outside town”, 因此, 应该将“which”改为“where”。