For example: One of my favorite writers are Charlotte Bronte. She was born in the early is nineteenth century when women had far fewer opportunities ∧ they have. than She lived in a small village in Yorkshire and she took great pleasure in walking √ on the moors |
I feel it's very important for families to have regular meals together. One
of my most useful childhood memories were dinner with my parents and 【D1】________
mm sisters. As a result, last year I decided that entire family would have 【D2】________
dinner together three days a week, because we found that we seldom had
a chante to get gather as a family. We thought it would be possible for 【D3】________
everyone to set aside three evenings a week for a sit-down dinner. First we
tried setting three fixed days for our experiment—Mondays, Wednesdays, 【D4】________
and Fridays. After a couple of weeks of thing this plan, almost everyone
was happy. Then my son had the idea of having everyone put their 【D5】________
plan for the week on the top of the TV set every Sunday. I would
choose the three best days. For a while. the kids continue to resist the 【D6】________
idea.They said they would rather spend the time playing with their friends or
take part in some activities. Gradually, though, they began to see these 【D7】________
evenings together in a different way. We had laughed a lot and we 【D8】________
discussed each other's problems. Now before a couple of months we all 【D9】________
feel that we have been able to build much strong relationships within 【D10】________
the family than we had before.
【D1】
were→was
(题意为“我童年经历中最有用的一段”, 即主语为第三人称单数, 故将were改为was。 )
【D2】
that∧entire→the
(entire family前加定冠词the表示特指作者自己全家, 而不是其他的家庭。 )
【D3】
gather→together
(get together为固定搭配, 意为“凑齐; 在一起”。 )
【D4】
√
【D5】
happy→unhappy
(根据下文可知, 很多孩子起先都对这个主意很抗拒, 后来才慢慢改善。 故此处改为unhappy更符合逻辑。 )
【D6】
continue→continued
(由于此处是在描述孩子们之前抗拒家庭聚会, 后面不再抗拒, 是发生在过去的事情, 故改为过去时。 )
【D7】
take→taking
(spend time doing sth.为固定搭配, 意为“花时间做某事”。 taking和playing为并列部分, 均用-ing形式。 )
【D8】
去掉had
(此处表示过去某个时间里发生的动作或状态, 对现在不产生影响。 故使用一般过去时。 )
【D9】
before→after
(根据逻辑, 应该是在几个月 的相聚之后, 家人的关系更亲近了, 而不是相聚之前。 故将before改为after。 )
【D10】
strong→stronger
(much+比较级表示“更加……”, 属固定搭配。 )