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There is much knowledge in raising children. Parents must not only protect their children, but also learn to let go of them at the right time. However, some parents are overprotective of their children, depriving them of the opportunity to explore the world on their own.

On the one hand, if parents overprotect their children and do not let them endure hardship at all, their children will not grow up to be independent adults. On the other hand, many parents can't distinguish between true love and spoiled love. The essence of love is to give children freedom, tolerating and appreciating them, while the essence of spoiled love is overprotection and control. In fact, parents shouldn't try to help their children remove almost all obstacles of everyday life. Instead, they should give their children a chance to take risks and make mistakes. Frequently talking to their children and encouraging them to try what they can do will help them become independent and confident adults.

Overprotection has a negative effect on children. Parents should keep in mind that no matter how much they are reluctant, they must let go of their children because their children's future is dependent on their own efforts.

养育孩子是一门大学问。父母既要保护好自己的孩子，也要学会在适当的时候放手。然而，有些父母对孩子保护过度，剥夺了他们自己探索世界的机会。

一方面，如果父母过度保护孩子，一点都不让他们吃苦，他们就不会成长为独立的成年人。另一方面，很多父母分不清真正的爱与溺爱。爱的本质是给孩子自由，宽容和欣赏他们，而溺爱的本质则是过度保护和控制。事实上，父母不应该试图帮助他们的孩子清除日常生活中几乎所有的障碍。相反，他们应该给孩子们一点机会去冒险和犯错。经常和孩子交谈，鼓励他们去尝试他们能做的事情，可以帮助孩子们成为独立和自信的成年人。

过度保护会对孩子产生负面影响。父母应该记住，不论多么不情愿，也要放开他们孩子的手，因为孩子们的未来取决于他们自己的努力。

1．There is much knowledge in raising children. Parents must not only protect their children, but also learn to let go of them at the right time. However, some parents are overprotective of their children, depriving them of the opportunity to explore the world on their own.

首段首先对题目中所给的短文发表了自己的观点，随后指出题目中所描述现象的危害，即父母的过度保护会剥夺孩子们探索世界的机会。

2. On the one hand, ...On the other hand, ...In fact, ...will help them become independent and confident adults.

第二段先从两个方面具体分析了父母过度保护孩子的影响和产生这种做法的原因，然后就父母应该如何做提出建议。文中使用了on the one hand、one the other hand和in fact等衔接词，使得行文富有逻辑性，观点更有说服力。

3．Overprotection has a negative effect on children. Parents should keep in mind that no matter how much they are reluctant, they must let go of their children because their children's future is dependent on their own efforts.

第三段进行总结，重申观点，并呼应开头。