【正确答案】正确答案：Dear Jack, I'll go to America for further study on April 15th, as the university has approved my application, which means I need to stay there for a year. Before that, I am supposed to arrive there next month since there will be a lot of stuff to get prepared. That is why I would ask you to do me a favor and help me find an apartment. A simple one with kitchen and bathroom will do. Thank you for your time. I am looking forward to seeing you there! Li Min

【答案解析】解析：1．电子邮件形式和句子长度不要太单调，有时短句和长句相间显得灵活。 2．写作多用从句会使得句子更长，而且句式灵活。比如： I’ll go to America for further study on April 15th，as the university has approved my application．It means I need to stay there for a year．改为：I’ll go to America for further study on April 15th，as the university has approved my application，which means I need to stay there for a year． 3．亲切、口语化的语言更加受欢迎，尤其用于这种朋友间的私人信件。例：A simple one with kitchen and bathroom will do． 4．电子邮件应写得简单明了，便于阅读，太长的内容可以用附件的方式发出。一个段落大多由一到三个句子组成。