我开始写小说, 是在进了女师的第二年, 那时刚满十五岁。 有一天, 我和两位小学时代的同学, 去一个同乡家里吃饭, 主人刚刚买了一个十三岁的丫头来, 那女孩长得面黄肌瘦, 身材短小, 满脸显着泪痕; 倒是一双乌溜溜的大眼睛, 非常惹人怜爱。 女主人是一位师长太太, 她命令女孩走路给我们看, 并请我们批评她的一举一动的姿势, 是否合于一个师长公馆用的丫头。 那两位同学真的将视线集中在女孩的身上; 可是我的眼里却正燃烧着不平的火焰!我恨那位女主人太不人道了, 简直把人当作畜生看, 我当时气得饭也吃不下, 借故回到学校,立刻写了一篇《刹那的印象》 。
I began to write fiction in my second year at the Women's Normal School when I had just reached the age of 15. One day, together with two classmates of the primary-school days, I went to dinner at a fellow provincial's home. The host had just bought a 13-year-old slave girl. Short and slight in build, she looked thin and sickly with a tear-stained face. But her bright big ebony eyes were just lovely. The hostess, who was a division commander's wife, ordered the girl to show us her gait so that we could judge whether each and every of her postures befitted her position as maid in an official mansion. As my former classmates were focusing their eyes on the poor girl, I burned with fury at her gross injustice. I detested the hostess for her inhuman act of treating the girl like an animal. I was too angry to eat and left on some excuse. Back at the school, I immediately wrote a story entitled My Instant Response.