问答题
1)describe the drawing briefly,
2) explain the intended meaning, and then
3) give your comments.
You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)
2) explain the intended meaning, and then
3) give your comments.
You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)
【正确答案】范文解析
How can a cardiogram be generated?The picture tells us that it can be drawn by hand．However，just look at the doctor’s sweat covered forehead，and you can find that it is not a joke．[1] In some rural areas in China，the medical facilities are far from sufficient． Residents there have to travel far to get to their nearest hospitals',and drugstores are surprisingly rare to spot．Even if the residents finally get to a local hospital，they may again suffer from all kinds of shortage ranging from medical equipment to personnel．
Fortunately，[2]the aforementioned phenomenon is gradually be- coming part of the history．The Chinese Central Government has never slowed down its pace to alleviate this problem．[3] Much atten- tion has been given to the three-dimensional rural issues concerning agriculture，countryside and farmers．As a traditional agricultural power，China has been presenting itself as a civilization in pursuit of fairness and equality for all its citizens．
As far as I am concerned，social infrastructure，especially those concerning people’s livelihood such as medical facilities and social welfare，should be given the top priority．[4]I sincerely wish our country would make a big leap forward towards the harmonious society as planned．
How can a cardiogram be generated?The picture tells us that it can be drawn by hand．However，just look at the doctor’s sweat covered forehead，and you can find that it is not a joke．[1] In some rural areas in China，the medical facilities are far from sufficient． Residents there have to travel far to get to their nearest hospitals',and drugstores are surprisingly rare to spot．Even if the residents finally get to a local hospital，they may again suffer from all kinds of shortage ranging from medical equipment to personnel．
Fortunately，[2]the aforementioned phenomenon is gradually be- coming part of the history．The Chinese Central Government has never slowed down its pace to alleviate this problem．[3] Much atten- tion has been given to the three-dimensional rural issues concerning agriculture，countryside and farmers．As a traditional agricultural power，China has been presenting itself as a civilization in pursuit of fairness and equality for all its citizens．
As far as I am concerned，social infrastructure，especially those concerning people’s livelihood such as medical facilities and social welfare，should be given the top priority．[4]I sincerely wish our country would make a big leap forward towards the harmonious society as planned．
【答案解析】写作指南
本幅漫画中，一名医生正在大汗淋漓地为一名大爷手画心电图。大爷怀疑心电图的做法，医生着急地回答说：“设备不齐，只能凑合”。漫画反映农村地区医疗设备不够健全，许多农民看病难的社会现象。根据题目要求：考生首先应对漫画内容进行简单描述，并进行适当解读；接着指出漫画反映出来的社会现象，并根据自己的理解对这一现象进行剖析；最后表明自己对该现象的看法。
问句开头法。作者借用一个设问句开头，自问自答，将图片中的故事阐述开来。同时，作者进行了适当扩展，对看病难、医疗设备短缺等社会问题进行了描述。
针对上段提出的种种问题，该段首先表述这些现象正成为历史，认为政府正在加大力度解决这一社会问题。
最后，作者提出自己的看法，认为关系到民计民生的问题的确是政府需要考虑的首要问题，希望政府能够在这方面前进一大步。
句型变换
[1]
1．In some rural areas in China，the medical facilities are far from SUfficient．
2．In some rural areas of China．the medical facilities fall short of the expected amount．
3．In some Chinese rural areas．there is a common phenomenon that medical facilities often run out．
[2]
1．the aforementioned phenomenon is gradually becoming part of the history．
2．the aforementioned phenomenon is becoming the thing of the past．
3．The phenomenon mentioned above is passing into history．
[3]
1．Much attention has been given to the threedimensional rural issues…
2．The three—dimensional rural issues have come into notice…
3．The three—dimensional rural issues have been highlighted…
[4]
1．…our country would make a big leap forward towards the harmonious society as planned
2．…our country would take a giant step forward towards the harmonious society as promoted．
3．…great advance would be made towards the goal of building a harmonious society．
本幅漫画中，一名医生正在大汗淋漓地为一名大爷手画心电图。大爷怀疑心电图的做法，医生着急地回答说：“设备不齐，只能凑合”。漫画反映农村地区医疗设备不够健全，许多农民看病难的社会现象。根据题目要求：考生首先应对漫画内容进行简单描述，并进行适当解读；接着指出漫画反映出来的社会现象，并根据自己的理解对这一现象进行剖析；最后表明自己对该现象的看法。
问句开头法。作者借用一个设问句开头，自问自答，将图片中的故事阐述开来。同时，作者进行了适当扩展，对看病难、医疗设备短缺等社会问题进行了描述。
针对上段提出的种种问题，该段首先表述这些现象正成为历史，认为政府正在加大力度解决这一社会问题。
最后，作者提出自己的看法，认为关系到民计民生的问题的确是政府需要考虑的首要问题，希望政府能够在这方面前进一大步。
句型变换
[1]
1．In some rural areas in China，the medical facilities are far from SUfficient．
2．In some rural areas of China．the medical facilities fall short of the expected amount．
3．In some Chinese rural areas．there is a common phenomenon that medical facilities often run out．
[2]
1．the aforementioned phenomenon is gradually becoming part of the history．
2．the aforementioned phenomenon is becoming the thing of the past．
3．The phenomenon mentioned above is passing into history．
[3]
1．Much attention has been given to the threedimensional rural issues…
2．The three—dimensional rural issues have come into notice…
3．The three—dimensional rural issues have been highlighted…
[4]
1．…our country would make a big leap forward towards the harmonious society as planned
2．…our country would take a giant step forward towards the harmonious society as promoted．
3．…great advance would be made towards the goal of building a harmonious society．