Rupert Brooke
Rupert Brooke,one of the leading poets of his generation,was
renowned as a romantic, unlike many of his contemporaries who 【D1】________
specialized in writing about the pointless of war. 【D2】________
He was born in 1887, the son of a House Master at Rugby,
where Rupert attended both the preparatory and main schools.When
he went up to Cambridge in 1906 as a classics scholar,he fared badly 【D3】________
in his examinations as his interests laid in literature and theater. 【D4】________
During his time at Cambridge, his wit and good 1ooks ensured his
place as a member of the elite circle of intel1ectuals study there. 【D5】________
After university he went to study German in Munich,falling in
love with a sculptress there and working feverishly to begin his first 【D6】________
volume of poetry, which produced a profit within a few weeks of its
publication in 1911.
With his early success,Brooke often felt unsettled as he 【D7】________
struggled to come to term with the underlying contradictions in his 【D8】________
character.Many times his free spirits and bohemianism conflicted 【D9】________
directly with the innate Puritanism he had inherited from his mother. 【D10】________
Because of these he would sometimes distance himself from his
fellows and adopt an irrational suspicious attitude towards them.
【D1】
who 前加上逗号
who 所指代的应是 Rupert Brooke, 而不是 many of his contemporaries。
【D2】
pointless 改为 pointlessness
the pointlessness of war 战争的无意义, the…of结构中应为名词。
【D3】
classics 改为 classical
classics为名词, 文学名著, 经典作品; classical为形容词, 人文科学的。此处应用形容词 classical来修饰scholar。
【D4】
laid 改为 lay
lie in 位于, 在于。 lie 的过去式为 lay。
【D5】
looks 改为 looking
his wit and good looking 为并列成分, 作主语。
【D6】
begin 改为 write
working feverishly to do sth 兴奋地做……, 后面的动词应为延续性动词。
【D7】
With 改为 Despite
从后文内容看, 此处应表示转折含义。
【D8】
term 改为 terms
come to terms with 为固定搭配, 达成协议, 妥协, 让步。
【D9】
spirits 改为 spirit
free spirit 为固定搭配, 无拘无束。
【D10】
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