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My View on Man-made Beauty
The desire for a beautiful appearance is one of human natures. The plastic surgery may really mean something to some people, at least they will become more beautiful. But every coin has two sides, and so does the man-made beauty practice for the following reasons.
Firstly, one"s appearance is God"s blessing. After breast enlargement surgery, many women look sexier than before. However, many of them are also diagnosed with mammary gland disease. The more serious problem is that they will suffer from the risk of being unable to breast feeding. Secondly, advocating such a practice will mislead people to false judgment of true beauty. The concept of beauty is quite rich beyond its content. It should include many virtues like honesty, diligence, etc., which should be the real mainstream of our aesthetic taste. The practice of man-made beauty will mislead those who are to develop correct concept of beauty.
Concerning the above possible threats the practice may bring about, I am strongly oppose man- made beauty and advocate true and natural beauty. Besides, people, especially women, should pay more attention to the cultivation of their inner beauty since the inner beauty outweighs the external beauty in the long run.
[解析] 本题是一篇命题作文，要求考生就社会上出现越来越多的人造美女这一现象陈述自己的观点。在行文时，首先，可以先通过这一现象引出话题。然后把自己对这一现象的看法分条陈述出来。最后，总结全文，重申主旨。