写作题

说明: 假如你是 ABC 服装公司销售部经理王华, 给客户约翰· 斯密斯先生写一封信, 信的主要内容如下:
1. 对方 6 月 15 日询问衬衫订购的来信已收到, 表示感谢;
2. 衬衫的价格将根据订购数量而定, 数量不足 100 件, 每件 80 元; 100 件及以上, 每件 75 元;
3. 我们公司生产的衬衫款式新颖, 价格公道, 对方也可以访问我们公司 的网站(网站地址自拟), 了 解我们产品的更多信息;
4. 随信寄去公司的产品价目表, 并表示愿意为对方提供周到的服务。

【正确答案】

Dear Mr. John Smith,

I am the sales manager of ABC Clothing Company. We were very delighted to receive your inquiry about shirt ordering on June 15.
The price of the shirt depends on the order quantity. If you order less than 100 pieces, the price for each piece is 80yuan and if you want more than 100 pieces (including100 pieces), the price will be 75 yuan.
The shirts produced by our company are of novel design but reasonable price. If you want to know more information on our products, welcome to visit our website at www. abcclothing. com.
Besides, our company's product price list is enclosed with the letter. It's our pleasure to provide you with considerate service.
Thank you for your previous letter again and I am looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,
Wang Hua

【答案解析】

针对题目所给出的信件的 4 点内容, 文章合理组织语言, 将每一个要点信息独立成段, 阐述清晰简洁, 突出重点, 行文具有逻辑性。 文章善用第一、 第二和第三人称转换, 句式灵活, 语言丰富, 可读性强。 信件称呼语和落款完整, 措辞正式, 商务书信格式规范。

【重点词汇】
ABC Clothing Company ABC 服装公司
sales manager 销售经理
order quantity 订单量
product price list 产品价目表
novel adj. 新颖的
reasonable adj.合理的, 公道的
enclose v. 附寄
thoughtful adj. 周到的
previous adj. 先前的