【正确答案】[参考范文]
Nowadays，there is a strange phenomenon that some famous athletes and entertainers earn millions of dollars every year．In contrast，elementary school teachers in rural areas just live on meager salaries．For me，I assert that it is not fair．It is a sign of our society's misplaced values．
Firstly，entertainers or athletes have not made much more contributions to the society than peoples in other professions．Why are they privileged to earn such a big amount of money so easily? Although we admit that we can have a nice show to enjoy or a wonderful match to watch，this is what they should do as an entertainer or an athlete．
Secondly，this unequal distribution of social resources will exert a negative effect on the younger generations．If most young people know that they can earn more money as athletes or entertainers，they are likely to ignore other meaningful yet less rewarding jobs．They will become money-goers．
Last but not least，some athletes and entertainers sometimes set bad examples to their fans．It is known that fans follow almost whatever their idols do，even some bad habits．Some misbehavior(such as taking drugs)of the popular singers or soccer players becomes newspaper headlines from time to time．
In conclusion，I think although it is true that athletes and entertainers bring a lot of benefit to the society in their own way，they do not deserve such high salaries．

【答案解析】[亮点回放]
用词亮点
(1)meager salaries：微薄的收入。
(2)assert：主张、坚持、认为。
(3)exert a negative effect on：产生负面影响。
(4)less rewarding jobs：报酬不高的工作。
句式亮点
长句与短句相结合，简单句与复杂句相结合，句式富于变化。如"If most young people know that they can earn more money as athletes OI entertainers，they are likely to ignore other meaningful yet less rewarding jobs．They will become money-goers．"。
篇章亮点
(1)文章观点明确，层次清晰，论证有力，前后呼应。
(2)各段先用主题句概括观点，接着进行详细分析。
(3)使用了多个关联词、转折词，使得文章结构分明、紧凑。
[谋篇布局]
1．第一部分引入对“体育明星和演艺明星是否应该获得高薪”这一论题的讨论，表明自己的观点。
2．第二部分围绕论点，从几个方面展开论述，必要时可以举例说明。
3．第三部分进行概括总结，对上文提及的意思进行精炼。