问答题
Directions:
In this part, you are to write within 30 minutes a composition of no less than 150 words under the title of
On the Employment Difficulty of College Graduates.
Your composition should be based on the cues given below. Please remember to write the composition clearly on the
COMPOSITION SHEET
.
1.近些年出现大学毕业生就业难的问题。
2.原因是什么?
3.你的建议。
【正确答案】
【答案解析】[参考范文]
In the past few years, college graduates have found it increasingly difficult to find a job. They might have to remain unemployed for a long time. This issue has aroused much concern in the society.
To my best knowledge, a variety of factors are responsible for this phenomenon, as listed below. In the first place, universities have been enrolling more students, which means there could be more supplies than demands. In the second, a number of academic programs in universities cannot meet the requirements of the society. Students with such education backgrounds can hardly find satisfactory jobs. In the third, the attitudes of some graduates towards career development are not realistic or rational. They prefer highly-paid jobs and would rather compete hopelessly in major cities like Beijing, Shanghai and Guangzhou than go to smaller cities, where they could have better job opportunities.
To my best understanding, the following approaches can be figured out to address the problem. To begin with, government is supposed to create more job opportunities by adjusting the economic structure or adopting appropriate policies. Moreover, universities are advised to adjust their programs and cultivate talents the society needs most. Last but not least, it is sensible that graduates change their attitudes towards career development and choose jobs that can realize their potential. Only by adopting these measures, can we resolve the problem effectively and efficiently.
[解析] 1.主题与类型:文章的主题在题目要求中已经明确,即大学毕业生就业难问题。从汉语提纲来看,是很典型的问题分析解决型,分析部分要求进行原因分析。可写三个自然段。
2.结构与构思:
第一段:首句介绍背景,指出存在的问题——大学毕业生就业难。如果有把握,可以使用数据,否则简单笼统介绍即可。最后一句使用“This issue has aroused much concern...”。
第二段:段首句用上原因分析功能句。然后开始分析原因,一般要求三条,可以就其中的一两个原因举具体例子。需要从客观和主观两大方面分析。客观原因:一方面是毕业生相对的供大于求,可以分析具体原因,如扩招和就业机会有限;一方面是大学专业不适应社会需要。主观原因是毕业生择业观的问题,只关注高薪和中心城市。
第三段:首句使用解决问题的建议主题句“...the following approaches can be figured out...”。然后从两三个方面,针对产生就业难的原因,提出不同建议。但注意不能简单提出缩小招生规模,因为这个说法争议会比较大,可以建议政府采取政策创造更多就业机会。