问答题
【正确答案】Sample A
To:Human Resources Manager
Subject: Staffing problem
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to you concerning staffing problem. Our department currently has a lot of work, you know it's about the party of New Year, but unluckly, our secretary's mother was ill, she must to take care of her, so she has take several weeks off. Could you arrang a temporary secretary for me. Thankyou!
Yours sincerely
Band 5
This is a very good attempt at the task set. All the content points are achieved. It is not error-flee, but no effort is required by the reader.
Sample B
Dear Mr Elmiger We have a lot of work and many people are ill. We have not time for all the works. The secretary must away for the work. Can come 3 people from the secretary to us ?
Karin
Band 2
This is an inadequate attempt at the task set. Only the first content point is covered. No reason is given for the secretary's absence, and the third point is unclear.
To:Human Resources Manager
Subject: Staffing problem
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to you concerning staffing problem. Our department currently has a lot of work, you know it's about the party of New Year, but unluckly, our secretary's mother was ill, she must to take care of her, so she has take several weeks off. Could you arrang a temporary secretary for me. Thankyou!
Yours sincerely
Band 5
This is a very good attempt at the task set. All the content points are achieved. It is not error-flee, but no effort is required by the reader.
Sample B
Dear Mr Elmiger We have a lot of work and many people are ill. We have not time for all the works. The secretary must away for the work. Can come 3 people from the secretary to us ?
Karin
Band 2
This is an inadequate attempt at the task set. Only the first content point is covered. No reason is given for the secretary's absence, and the third point is unclear.
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