Suppose you have damaged your friend' s computer when you lived in his house a few days ago. Write him a letter to 1)make an apology, and 2)suggest a solution. You should write about 100 words on the ANSWER SHEET. Do not use your own name. Use "Li Ming" instead. Do not write the address.(10 points)
【正确答案】正确答案: Dear Mr. Zhang, Now I am writing to express my apology for the damage of your computer during my stay in your house when I visited Beijing a few days ago. It is just because of my carelessness that I damaged your computer. I understand that it must have brought you a lot of trouble and inconvenience so I feel extremely guilty for what I have done to you. In order to compensate for your loss, I decide to buy you a new computer and send it to you by EMS. Please accept my sincere apologies and forgive me for my ridiculous carelessness. Yours sincerely, Li Ming
【答案解析】解析:考生要想在小作文中取得高分,首先要确定书信类型。本文是一篇典型的道歉信,因此,考生在遣词造句时,应体现道歉信的语体特点。其次,根据要求,本文应该分为三段,首段需开门见山,点出主题。第二段论述自己的补偿措施或解决方法。末段再次点题,表达歉意。最后,考生需切记字数要求,不要过多或过少。