【正确答案】[高分范文]
Life Is Precious
From the picture, we can see a man is crossing the street in a hurry. And he is not walking on the pavement, instead, he is running in front of cars which are moving on the street. And to avoid hitting him, the front car makes a sudden stop. The following car hits the front car on its back. Thus an accident is caused.
The man who is crossing the street doesn't take life seriously, both his and others. Running across a street is very dangerous because the running person can be easily hurt by cars. And if the car which is about to hit the person makes a sudden break, there may be a car accident, just like the picture, thus the people in the cars might be hurt.
Life is precious, and also vulnerable. We should not put ourselves in danger by any improper behavior.

【答案解析】[解析]
这篇看图作文是一篇警示性的图画文章。第一步要先向读者描述这张图片说的是什么事情。第二步要加入自己的评论。警示性的文章在评论中要向读者阐明图片中所示的危险性。最后在文章结尾可以加入号召性的话语。
[高频词句]
1．in a hurry急急忙忙地，很匆忙
2．Life is precious，and also vulnerable．生命是珍贵的，也是脆弱的。
3．We should not put ourselves in danger by any improper behavior．我们不应因任何不当行为而把自己置于危险之中。