【答案解析】[参考范文]
Unfolded before us is a story simply written yet profoundly meaningful. It is about Deng Yaping, one of the greatest female table tennis players, who fought her way to championship, despite the various hardships and challenges. This story obviously intends to convey to us this message: persistence is a virtue we need to possess for our success.
To my best knowledge, we can easily identify the significance of persistence from the following perspectives. To begin with, it will enable people to conquer adversities. Deng Yaping is a case in point. She never gave up her strong desire to compete and win, even if she was rejected because of her height. If people are lack of persistence in adversity, they will not carry on when confronted with difficulties. Furthermore, persistence will help people to win others" trust when there is a need or chance for cooperation. If people do not have this, others would hardly venture to cooperate with them.
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that with persistence, we will have better chances to achieve success. Without it, we are more likely to lose, be persistent in our work or life. It is highly recommended that we make great efforts to cultivate persistence in our lives. We persist; therefore we win. [解析] 1．主题与类型：题目类型为读后感，故事围绕邓亚萍小时候被体校拒收到成长为世界冠军的拼搏历程展开。考题没有给出题目，因此需要考生自己概括。故事揭示的主题比较明显，就是持之以恒的精神persistence，并且要结合面对困难的心态。文章为典型的意义分析型，可以写成三段。
2．结构与构思：
第一段：首句使用读后感描述主题句“Unfolded before us is a story...”，然后用两三句概述故事，接着使用读后感主题引导功能句“This story obviously intends to...message:”，后面接的主题句可以表达为“persistence是每个人都应具备的素质”。
第二段：段首句用素质意义分析型功能句，然后从两三个方面分析意义所在，从自身、别人对自己的看法等方面来分析，中间需要将邓亚萍的例子用上。
第三段：首句使用意义分析型结论段功能句“...we may safely draw the conclusion that...”，然后重申主题persistence的意义，最后以素质类意义分析型文章的建议功能句“It is highly recommended that we make great efforts...”结尾。