问答题 Directions: You are to write an essay titled "Should People Retire Later?" according to the following situation:
Recently the huge deficit in the pension fund in China has aroused great public concern. Research shows that although the legal retirement age in China is 60 for men and 55 for most women, many employees of State-owned enterprises have been allowed to retire in their 40s or 50s to make openings for new graduates and others. Besides, the mandatory retirement age in China is 51.2 years, 10 years younger than that of many countries. Some experts therefore suggest that we raise the mandatory retirement age. What do you think of their suggestion?
Requirements: Write an essay of about 400 words to expound clearly your viewpoint on this topic. You need to supply a title for your essay.
In the first part of your writing you should present your viewpoint in a well-formulated thesis statement; in the second part, you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details; in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion with a comment.
Marks will be awarded for content, organization, syntactic variety, proper length, and appropriate word choice. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in the loss of marks. Remember to produce a clean fair copy.
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Should People Retire Later?
Recently, some experts suggest that we raise the mandatory retirement age because of the huge deficit in the pension fund in China. Meanwhile, a major portal website in China asked the public "do you think the age of retirement should be raised?" The results were frankly, very one-sided. Almost 95 percent of the participants responded negatively to the idea. The main reason given was that it affects the employment and life of the younger generation. Only 2 percent said yes to the proposal. Even the BBC news mentioned that retirement results in a "drastic decline in health" in the medium and long term. I think that reason cannot account for the raise of retirement age. And in my view, the government should not raise the mandatory retirement age.
I will state my opinion from three points. Firstly, it can increase the employment pressure. As we all know, the unemployment is the most serious problem that young people face. According to the data, college students nationwide will reach 7 million this year, increasing by one hundred and 90 thousand than that last year, but the actual provision of new job and the job vacancy caused by retirement is only 12 million each year. So there is a huge gap between supply and demand. Clearly, from these data, we know China is currently facing the severe unemployment problem. If we raise the retirement age, it will undoubtedly make the employment situation worse. Second, raise retirement age will lower the productivity. We know that in information age, the technology updates constantly, people should keep the pace of technology. However, the elder"s ability of learning is decreasing with the age, so the young labor productivity is higher than the elder on average. If retirement age is raised, the enterprise will pay more for the elders even though they cannot create equally value for the enterprise with the young people, which will indirectly increase the company"s burden. Lastly, not all the people are willing to postpone retirement, especially those people who do physical works. Long-term labor makes them unhealthful. They should have had a happy life in their late life. However, if we raise the retirement age, they have to work for even longer than before, this will make their health worse.
In a conclusion, I personally do not advocate the raise of retirement age. The higher the retirement age is, the fewer jobs there are for the young. However, whether an increase in the retirement age is good or bad should be considered comprehensively from the population, social security, female worker"s own development problems, especially the employment problem. So the government should listen to the views of the community before making policies.