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The Most Important Quality for a Person To Be Successful in the World Today
I think the most important quality for a person to be successful in the world today is being tolerant. Here I do not define success economically. I define success socially. To succeed in the future, we will need to be tolerant of different background, opinions, and lifestyles.
Our modern society has become increasingly open. People from different cities, provinces or even different countries come to work in one workplace. So we must learn to live and work with these people and to be tolerant of the cultures, beliefs and lifestyles which are different from ours if we want to live and work with them peacefully.
In the present world, many a war was waged just because of different opinions or beliefs. We should not do things like that. We should not stop speaking to people or start a quarrel just because we have different opinions and beliefs. We must learn to be tolerant of one another and respect different opinions. We should find a common ground -- an idea we can both agree on. Once we have agreed on one subject, it will be easier for us to settle differences in other subjects.
Learning to be tolerant is very important for everyone if he or she wants to be successful socially in our modern world.
【答案解析】[解析] 这是一篇提纲作文。文体为阐述性论说文。要求考生正面阐述自己的观点:认为在现在的世界上要想成功什么素质最重要,并举例说明自己的理由。考生写作时要紧扣标题,开门见山地说出自己的观点,确立文章的中心思想,然后再分层次举例说明自己的理由。举例要贴切,说服力要强。
提纲作文一定要囊括所给提纲中包含的全部内容,但也不要拘泥于提纲,更不能逐字翻译提纲,要自己发挥。