问答题
【正确答案】
[范文]
Those buildings depicted in the pictures actually symbolize the people residing there, behaving exactly different as one's circumstance differs. They seem to be so passionate and friendly when their neighbor is all right; by contrast, they become as hard as nails when the neighbor encounters difficulty.
It seems very ridiculous for such a sharp change. However, it is the exact reflection of interpersonal relationships in modern society. One major reason is in cities people come and go a lot. They change jobs frequently and move on, which means that they don't put down roots in the community. Thus, in daily life, they may merely say "hello" to each other at meetings, without any intention to cultivate a closer friend ship. Another reason is civilization is somewhat neglected in the process of economic development. No doubt people feel much pressured facing intense competition, having no extra energy to spare on others. Yet one should never fail to realize that no man is a lonely island. Instead, we are all members of a certain group and should be ready to help each other.
This phenomenon is no good to us, nor to our society. People will feel lonely more and more. The world becomes so indifferent. It's time that we took some measures to improve it. People living in the same community can be organized to have some activities together. We should call on people to be friendly to each other, and then a harmonious society can be formed.
[范文]
Those buildings depicted in the pictures actually symbolize the people residing there, behaving exactly different as one's circumstance differs. They seem to be so passionate and friendly when their neighbor is all right; by contrast, they become as hard as nails when the neighbor encounters difficulty.
It seems very ridiculous for such a sharp change. However, it is the exact reflection of interpersonal relationships in modern society. One major reason is in cities people come and go a lot. They change jobs frequently and move on, which means that they don't put down roots in the community. Thus, in daily life, they may merely say "hello" to each other at meetings, without any intention to cultivate a closer friend ship. Another reason is civilization is somewhat neglected in the process of economic development. No doubt people feel much pressured facing intense competition, having no extra energy to spare on others. Yet one should never fail to realize that no man is a lonely island. Instead, we are all members of a certain group and should be ready to help each other.
This phenomenon is no good to us, nor to our society. People will feel lonely more and more. The world becomes so indifferent. It's time that we took some measures to improve it. People living in the same community can be organized to have some activities together. We should call on people to be friendly to each other, and then a harmonious society can be formed.
【答案解析】[审题]
这道题目看似简单，却富含哲理，对考生是一个很大的挑战。在谋篇布局上，需要精心安排。可以这样展开行文：在描述图画后，在第二段中直接从两幅图的不同点着手分析导致这种现象产生的原因，而后在第三段由社区扩展到整个社会，最后总结全文，提出希望。因此，本文的写作关键是要看到图画作者试图通过对几栋高楼的刻画点出城市生活中的人情冷暖。毋庸置疑，城市的生活节奏是很快的，所以大多数人在匆匆忙忙之间无暇顾及近邻们的感受，彼此的交往只停留在见面打个招呼的层面上，而一旦其中有人遇到困难，大家往往袖手旁观。要想成为高分作文，就要看能否将这样一个普普通通的主题延伸到更深层次，比如这里所给的范文，就将主题升华到构建和谐社会，以小见大，意义深远。
这道题目看似简单，却富含哲理，对考生是一个很大的挑战。在谋篇布局上，需要精心安排。可以这样展开行文：在描述图画后，在第二段中直接从两幅图的不同点着手分析导致这种现象产生的原因，而后在第三段由社区扩展到整个社会，最后总结全文，提出希望。因此，本文的写作关键是要看到图画作者试图通过对几栋高楼的刻画点出城市生活中的人情冷暖。毋庸置疑，城市的生活节奏是很快的，所以大多数人在匆匆忙忙之间无暇顾及近邻们的感受，彼此的交往只停留在见面打个招呼的层面上，而一旦其中有人遇到困难，大家往往袖手旁观。要想成为高分作文，就要看能否将这样一个普普通通的主题延伸到更深层次，比如这里所给的范文，就将主题升华到构建和谐社会，以小见大，意义深远。