问答题 Directions:
Write a composition according to the following picture and requirements.
A. Title: Good Manners
B. Word limit: 160~200 words.
Outline :
(1) Describe the picture.
(2) Similar situations in other aspects of daily life.
(3) Your comments.
【正确答案】
Good Manners

Here is an incident that often occurs in a narrow street. Each of the two cars has blocked the way of the other, but either of them would like to back or move sideways a bit to give way to the other. Consequently, they are both stuffed there and neither can go to their intended destination.
As an onlooker, we can see clearly that this problem can be solved easily i{ only one of them can demonstrate more cultivated manners to compromise. Once the first car gets through, so will the other. Unfortunately, neither of the two in the picture seems to possess the good manners.
In fact, this phenomenon is not uncommon in other aspects of our daily life when people are competing for a better job, a promotion, or an opportunity to go abroad. In my opinion, given that both parties are equally competent and that the selection procedures are fair, it may not be a bad idea for one to let go his or her claim and wait for a second chance. This is an intelligent decision with little loss but much gains. He will win respect and avoid hurting his colleagues or being hurt.
【答案解析】[提示] 本题要求写一篇议论文。画面上两辆小轿车在一条狭窄的街道上相会,因为双方都不肯首先避让,致使交通堵塞,耽误了自己的时间,也影响了其他人。应首先用关于道路、交通、车辆的词语描述当时的情景,再考虑生活中有哪些类似的因争抢而无法解决问题,以及所造成的不良后果,如面对提薪、晋升、出国留学等难得的机会激烈竞争、互不相让的局面。
接下来,需要想出所有可以写进作文的观点和可以使用的词句,即有关争吵的描述、引起争吵的缘由、争吵带来的后果、人们的态度等。再将这些内容和词句添加到规定的提纲中,使之更加具体、充实,然后开始写作。
写出好文章有两条最重要的基本要求,一是要有独到的内容,二是要用准确生动的语言。这两者都来自平时的积累,不是几个月的突击复习就能奏效的。在复习阶段,考生应一步一个脚印地积累,并有意识地练习使用已经学过的语言知识和所了解的各类信息。从这个意义上说,在开始动笔写草稿之前,对丰题和角度的构思和词语的准备是非常重要的。