【答案解析】[写作要求]
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故事叙述应依照试卷提供的首句展开 |
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语法与结构 |
过去时态的运用;恰当的运用与文章主题相吻合的词汇 |
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文章结构及连贯性 |
1. 安排小篇幅的段落 2.
故事应有结尾,即使此结尾不一定是非常明确的 (如众多现代短篇小说一样以开放式结尾) |
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适用文体及格式 |
非正式文体的叙述;保持通篇一致的中立观点 |
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目标读者感觉 |
能明晰故事的主线 |
[参考范文]
It
was only a small mistake but it changed my life forever,
In the
year 2001, I took part in a review class for 2002 MBA entrance exam. I studied
math, administration and other courses everyday. I tried my best to study those
courses in order to pass the exam.
On January 17, 2002, it was
the time for me to take part in the exam. I was very excited and nervous. I
checked my stationery again and again. I even forgot to have my breakfast on
that day. When I went into the classroom, the examiner asked me to produce the
ID card. Oh, my God, what happened? I forgot to bring my ID card with me.
Therefore, I missed the math exam. As a result, I lost the chance to pursue MBA
courses that year.
Then, I was arranged to a branch company in
another city. Because I was new there both to the position and the environment,
I was busy making myself be suitable to the situation, Therefore, I would not
have time to prepare for the MBA examination anymore. Time flies fast, three
year later, the branch company was closed for not running well. Since I did not
have MBA degree, I lost the management position.
Consequently,
my whole life changed.