问答题
●You work for an advertising agency.
●Read the part of a letter below from a client, Ms Reeves, asking you to give a presentation to her colleagues.
【正确答案】
【答案解析】Sample A
23. Nov. 2002
Dear Ms Reeves
Thank you for your letter regarding the presentation at your meeting on 15th December.
I"m very sorry, but I"m unable to attend this meeting. In Stuttgart there is a fair I have to be present from 13th December to 17th December.
I would suggest an appointment in January. The 15th January is a day I will be available all time.
If you agree please contact my secretary Gina Johnes by 0172/55555 to confirm the date.
We looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Your sincerely
Band 5
Although not entirely free of errors, none of these is impeding and the response is clear and well organised, covering all the content points.
Sample B
Dear Ms Reeves
Sorry, but I can not attend the meeting, because I am on 15th December on holiday. Of course I would give a short presentation about new advertising in your department. I could hold the presentation on 15th January next year. Please give me the contact from your secretary to confirm the arrangements.
Yours faithfully
Band 3
The range of language used in this response is adequate, as is its cohesion and organisation; however the final content point has not been achieved.
23. Nov. 2002
Dear Ms Reeves
Thank you for your letter regarding the presentation at your meeting on 15th December.
I"m very sorry, but I"m unable to attend this meeting. In Stuttgart there is a fair I have to be present from 13th December to 17th December.
I would suggest an appointment in January. The 15th January is a day I will be available all time.
If you agree please contact my secretary Gina Johnes by 0172/55555 to confirm the date.
We looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Your sincerely
Band 5
Although not entirely free of errors, none of these is impeding and the response is clear and well organised, covering all the content points.
Sample B
Dear Ms Reeves
Sorry, but I can not attend the meeting, because I am on 15th December on holiday. Of course I would give a short presentation about new advertising in your department. I could hold the presentation on 15th January next year. Please give me the contact from your secretary to confirm the arrangements.
Yours faithfully
Band 3
The range of language used in this response is adequate, as is its cohesion and organisation; however the final content point has not been achieved.