问答题
· You would like to attend a sales conference in New York next month, but your department is trying to reduce expenses.
· Write an email to your manager, Ross Carpenter:
· asking him to allow you to go to the conference
·explaining why you think you should go
· suggesting how you could reduce the cost of the trip.
· Write 30-40 words on your Answer Sheet.
【正确答案】
【答案解析】{{B}}Sample A{{/B}}
Could you allow me to go to the conference, please. I am very interesting in sales and it should be an advantage for my career. If you agree, I could go by car with my colleague to reduce the cost. Thanks
{{B}}Band 4{{/B}}
Although this response achieves the three content points, the reader would be unsure which conference is being referred to.
{{B}}Sample B{{/B}}
Dear Mr Carpenter,
I would like required you attention on the sale conference in New York next month. In fact I think I could meeting own customers and make discover the new technologies of the laboratory.
I know you a reduce of cost policy, but if I take a old charter and I stay one day-in order to two days and that I launch a sandwich.
{{B}}Band 2{{/B}}
All the content points are attempted, and achieved to some extent, but overall the message is inadequate.