【正确答案】One possible version:
Dear Tim,
I’m writing to ask if it is possible for my best friend Li Ming to rent a room in your house.He is going to study computer science in a university in London next month.He is an excellent student with high scores.In his spare time, Li Ming likes reading books, watching movies and listening to music, especially light music.He is a very kind and friendly person, always ready to help others.I’m sure that your family will get along well with him.I will give you more information about him if it is necessary.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案解析】该书面表达主要考查书信的写作格式及人物介绍。人物的详细情况已经给出。英语书信作文的格式通常包括三大要素:Salutation(称呼),Body of Letter(信的正文),Complementary Close(结束语),Signature(签名)。称呼一般由Dear+人名/职称构成。信的正文需完整的陈述本篇书面表达所要求的内容,注意语言表达需简洁明了。结束语是写信人对收信人的谦称,一个词的开头字母要大写,末尾用逗号,常用的结束语有Sincerely yours、Yours等。签名,即写信人署名,写在结束语下面偏右处。在写作时需注意写作格式的规范、句式的变化及连词的运用。
写作亮点:这篇书信作文,格式正确,语言无误,行文连贯,表达清楚。在具体的写作中句式丰富,如:简单句:Li Ming likes reading books, watching movies and listening to music;宾语从句:if it is possible for my beat friend Li Ming to rent a room in your house;条件状语从句:if it is necessary等。