【正确答案】Topic: I believe that our schools should focus on teaching relevant skills based on the needs and demands of the students.
Reason 1: First, classes should teach young people Microsoft Office and other computer courses, as well as mechanics, engineering, customer services skills, and whatever else the students need for their future career.
Reason 2: The second major change I would like to see is a greater effort to retain students until they are adults. Now, pupils can drop out of school due to poverty. I would like to see a project to keep more students in school until their graduation.

【答案解析】Alternative Wording(替换表达)
Synonyms focus on—emphasize, place importance on
Paraphrases I would like to see a program aimed at student retention till graduation.